Book Review 2-2

I read the book "THE WHITE ORYX" I will review this story.
Mandy Brown was in the desert with Abdullah. She should take photos of the oryx for her book. Abdullah was an oryx ranger. He helped her find oryxes. With the radios they could find oryxes. Suddenly there was a noise behind them. It was the big radio in the car. The oryx looked up and ran away quickly. She thought there were poachers near them. Mandy got into the car and they drove away quickly across the desert. The sand made a long yellow cloud behind the car. Poachers usually shot the young oryx and sold them, so they were really dangerous. Mandy found some blood in the sand and then saw an oryx with a big hole in its neck. She was already dead. He thought the dead oryx had her baby. They guessed poachers killed that oryx. So they called police.They began to find her baby and drove quickly across the desert again. They could see the cloud of sand behind the poachers and they were very near them. Suddenly a man with a gun was coming to them. They thought they were killed by him. They tried to go away from him with his car, but his car didn't move. Then there was a very big noise and they saw a helicopter of the police. The police came down near the poachers. The poachers quickly put their guns on the sand and put up their hands. Abdullah and Mandy ran to the truck and found the young oryw there. The mother orywx was dead, but that young oryx was fine. Then she took photos of the police and their helicopter. She also took photos of the poachers, too. It was good day for her because she got some very interesting pictures for her book about the animal of the desert.
It was a little short story but interesting. I like stories like this because it is easy to read and I can enjoy reading. Anyway, I thought Arabic names are difficult to read in English. I do not know how to pronounce "Abdullah". I will learn how to pronounce it someday!